Faced with the increasingly severe pressure of traditional energy consumption and environmental problems, electric vehicles have become the hotspot and trend of the development of the world automobile industry due to their energy-saving and environmental protection characteristics. The cloud platform in the paper was introduced into the monitoring system of electric vehicle charging facilities, and a model of electric vehicle charging facility monitoring system based on cloud platform was proposed. Aiming at the difficulty of charging facility monitoring system in large concurrent data processing, a M/M/C queuing theory model was presented. Data concurrency control algorithm. The transmission process of the data frame in the monitoring system was analyzed, and the concurrent processing algorithm was applied to the large charging station for analysis experiments. The experimental results showed that the proposed algorithm not only satisfied the real-time and concurrency requirements of data frame transmission, but also proved that the gateway optimization method could accurately derive the optimal number of gateways.