In order to achieve multi-objective optimization for a permanent magnet water pump motor in heavy commercial vehicles, we propose a strategy based on response-surface methodology and the improved sparrow algorithm (CGE-SSA). Firstly, the output capacity of the pump during actual operation was tested with an experimental bench to determine the design parameters of the motor, and then its modeling was completed using Ansys Maxwell 2022r2 software. Secondly, the response-surface model was established by taking the parameters of permanent magnet width, rib width, and slot width as optimization parameters and the output torque (Ta), torque ripple (Tr), and back electromotive force (EMF) amplitude as optimization objectives. Meanwhile, three methods—namely, circular sinusoidal chaotic mapping, improved golden sinusoidal strategy, and adaptive weight coefficients—were used to improve the convergence speed and accuracy of the sparrow search algorithm (SSA). Finally, the multi-objective optimization of the permanent magnet synchronous motor was completed using the improved sparrow algorithm. A comparative analysis of the motor’s output before and after optimization showed that the torque pulsation and reverse electromotive force of the motor were significantly improved after optimization.