Abstract
Pat: Sorry to hear you broke your hand. That's pretty good writing for using the opposite hand. I liked your ideas, but you need to give examples. For instance, tell how Capitol Hill got a tough reputation, or why it has that reputation. You have some fragmented sentences. What do you mean by soft? Try to show how the kids have changed. How about in the 1960's how all the kids got involved in peace movements? Today's kids don't really seem to care. Also, try to keep your concluding paragraph from contradicting your first. Good Work! Taiya
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