350 Western American Literature Shiny Objects. By Dianne Benedict. (Iowa City: University of Iowa Press, 1982. 137 pages, $8.95.) The 1983 winner of the Iowa Short Fiction Award, Shiny Objects, is a collection of eight stories about the people and land of South Texas. The author, Dianne Benedict, grew up in the Rio Grande Valley and visited often with relatives in East Texas. Dissatisfied with an early career as a professional painter and art instructor, Benedict found that through writing she could transcend the limitations of her painting. With that discovery, she immersed herself in writing and in her early Texas experiences. Now a teacher of cre ative writing and literature at Vermont College and a contributor to INTRO, fiction international, and Atlantic Monthly, Benedict claims that if she attempts “to write about anything but the people, the land, and the roots of my beginnings, the pages turn to sawdust and words have no more power to fly than stones.” There is an obsessed quality about this collection: Benedict’s characters are solitary and intense; their stories are compelling. She writes of a lonely white woman who becomes a murderer when she is sexually exploited by the man she loves; of a black man who takes a pregnant white girl into his home and helps deliver her baby, only to be repaid with a vicious vandalism; of a boy who learns about responsibility by helping bathe the dead body of his grandmother; of an old Indian man who delivers his adopted son from the surreal and hellish world of a carnival; of a dying farmer whose last days are witnessed through a haze of hallucination. Benedict’s characters are some times bizarre, but always real. And as in Carson McCullers’ and Flannery O’Connor’s fiction, their eccentricities and deformities often serve to intensify the experiences of her characters. This is especially evident in the title story, “Shiny Objects,” in which a dying twelve-year-old, Bible-inspired, hydro cephalic dwarf-child, by far the oddest of Benedict’s characters, brings a moment of tenderness to an embittered widow, as she carries his misshapen body in her arms across a cactus flat. Throughout, the tough and vibrant Texas landscape interacts with these people, sometimes responsive — as when a crow takes a shiny object from the dwarf-child to the widow — sometimes indifferent, but always powerful. In “Where the Water Is Wide,” a deaf storekeeper, taught innocence and love by a deaf girl just before her accidental death, reverently places her body in a small black stream as rain begins to fall; in a few moments, the rising waters carry the girl’s body away to awe the picnickers downstream. Benedict’s descriptions are delicate, sure, and luminous as she depicts the grim struggles of her characters within a magnificent, even mythic Texas landscape: “He saw a solitary man silhouetted there with his arms raised as though in praise of the water, which lay rare and vast at his feet, or of the sky which was filled with a kind of candlelight at that hour, or of the earth which was turning slowly towards the darkness.” Shiny Objects is a fine book that captures both the beauty and the sordid, poverty-stricken reality of South Texas. CORINNE DALE, Texas A&M University ...
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